Chapter 2 – Destructive Awakening : Page 1
on March 31, 2010 at 10:58 pmPosted In: Chapter 2 : Destructive Awakening, Comic
As promised, TWO pages this week! Hope you like the artistic UPGRADES! I’ve learned quite a bit from starting my other comic L.A.W.L.S. and felt like Chapter 2 would be a pretty good place to incorporate some of the things I’ve learned in the month since I’ve started it. Enjoy!
↓ Transcript
[Panel 1]
Eydis Wakes up from the dream state with tears in her eyes.
[Panel 2]
::Banging on her apartment door:: A voice from the other said says, "Eydis What's going on in there? Open up!"
[Panel 3]
Eydis jumps up quickly from her state of delirium.
Eydis: Shit, the landlord!
She thinks to herself "What the hell am I supposed to do? There is no way to explain this...
[Panel 4 & 5]
She grabs her jacket ready to run out, "I can't deal with this now... Gotta get the hell out of here!" She thinks to herself as she heads for the window to escape!
Copyright 2010 Anhedonia Blue
Joenis Norac | Denis Caron
Eydis Wakes up from the dream state with tears in her eyes.
[Panel 2]
::Banging on her apartment door:: A voice from the other said says, "Eydis What's going on in there? Open up!"
[Panel 3]
Eydis jumps up quickly from her state of delirium.
Eydis: Shit, the landlord!
She thinks to herself "What the hell am I supposed to do? There is no way to explain this...
[Panel 4 & 5]
She grabs her jacket ready to run out, "I can't deal with this now... Gotta get the hell out of here!" She thinks to herself as she heads for the window to escape!
Copyright 2010 Anhedonia Blue
Joenis Norac | Denis Caron
i like the last cell; lots of movement and crazy angle. i like how it distorts her body too
Action in Perspective = Mind Distortion & Explosion.
It’s awesome – I especially like that last panel- great use of perspective to create momentum and movement. I have NO artistic talent (for the fine arts – my “art” is only through words), so I’m fairly easily impressed, but still I read a LOT of web comics and your art is easily in the top 25% quality-wise.
Why thank you, i appreciate that, your comment put a smile of my face today.
Hahaha i love that she calls herself an idiot!
Me too, I actually write myself little notes like that ALL THE TIME! :]
wow…i couldn’t remember why she needed to get out, cause i thouht all that had happened was the whole laughing manaically thing…but she threwe the DnD creature threw the window…yeah…that’ll be awkward
Yeah.. her life is about to become a gigantic mess!
I want a “Loot Whore” shirt
:] I’ve been thinking about possibly making one actually! Just depends on the demand for it. haha
glad its back!
Glad you’re back to read it. :]
I can see the changes in your art just from going through the rest of Chapter 1, into now. Kudos!
Thanks! When i flip thru my archive as well.. I can see dramatic leaps and bounds in my work. Makes me happy. I’m glad you’ve noticed….and that it’s a good thing. :]
Eydis is on the run now?
That’s an unexpected twist.
(In my little world, that is. I didn’t expect it.)
Well, gotta always remember, My aim with ABlue is to keep you on your toes as to what will happen next! :] So seems then that my mission is accomplished?