Chapter 1 – Kindled Eye : Page 3

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  1. nixonagnew

    super excitement!

  2. scotticus

    i need family friendly joenis, FAMILY FRIENDLY, pfft!

    ;) i’m kidding of course

    • Joenis

      Pft, go read Oglaf.

      • scotticus

        Haha, fine, I will go read Oglaf, I’m sure its of “The Family Circus” and “Archie” quality ;)

        • Joenis

          I Don’t have a clue what “The Family Circus” or “Archie” are, but they sound down right perverted.

          • scotticus

            Family Circus is kind of like p-p-p-pepp-peppermint- (dun dun dunnn!)

  3. Patrick

    is this inspired by when you moved to Seattle? sorta seems like it with the weather comment

    • Joenis

      I started writing the basic script and developing Eydis’ character when i finished college at Santa Cruz, it wasn’t until I moved to Seattle that i really started diving into the meet of the story writing / plot… THOUGH I had already decided the setting, who the main characters were and the basic direction of the comic.

  4. Ali

    Looks great. I like your use of textures and lighting. Really sells it.

    • Joenis

      Thank you sir, that’s a constant work in progress for me but I’m happy I’m pulling it off so far. :]

  5. AndyCarolan

    Looking really good, love your art style, great use of colour too :)

    • Joenis

      Thanks! I’ve been working hard to come up with a good color scheme for the comic & website. Glad it’s working for you so far, and thanks for the compliments!

  6. Jimidean

    Ooooooh i love watching chicks get dressed, especially when they dont know im watching them ….. and she has NO CLUE!! muhahaha!!!
    nice work duder

    • niXtuff

      I like it the other way around (oops did I just say that!)

      • Joenis

        Wait…Are you saying that you love undressing girls.. or that you love when they watch YOU undress unaware that they are watching?

        • niXtuff

          eh…. hum… how about both?

  7. niXtuff

    More fan art!!
    http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y29/pellaken/Webcomic/morebadart.png?t=1258007046
    But that’s it for a while. Do you know how hard I work to make these things? (Not very. But then again I’m lazy)

    • Joenis

      wow… i look creepy.

      • niXtuff

        Sorry, I cant help that, its just the way God made ye :D

  8. midnightvalntine

    Um, I hate to correct you, but I do see one little error in the above description- anhedonia isn’t a psychological disorder. In the DSM- IV it’s listed as a symptom of the mood disorders “Depression” and “Major Depressive Episodes”, as well as being a symptom for a few other disorders (such as Schizophrenia and Schizoid Personality Disorder).

    Just thought you might not mind some constructive corrections coming from a psychology student (I’m currently taking a class on this, and have a copy of a DSM reference guide sitting in front of me ^_^)

    Love the art, by the way. Very pretty.

    • Joenis

      You know what? You are totally right… See I wasn’t really sure what Anhedonia was classified as, in fact its rather difficult to even find out more about it from the DSM-IV itself. Which, that in itself should have been an indicator to me that it’s not a disorder of its own. I actually learned about Anhedonia AFTER I was out of college, I never had a teacher even bring it up, so my knowledge of it is all self learned… Reflecting on that it it’s self, I should have realized that sooner.

      Either way, luckily, my misconstruction isn’t going to damage any part of the story.. she is having the anhedonic symptoms as a reaction to the future plot line.

      Thank you for the constructive comment, I actually really appreciate it. I whipped out my DSM-IV and will make sure to read it more closely when I make my attempt to explain things. (There’s a reason I moving my career towards Art rather than Psychology these days ^_~)

  9. scotticus fergusus

    I’m looking forward to the next update Joenis, I want to see this “ambitious endeavor” I heard about ;)

  10. Zebyron

    I like the art in this comic.
    I think I’m going to like the story too,
    I’m looking forward to reading the rest of it.

    Besides that, and this might sound weird, I also like Eydis’ personality, especially what she says about her clothes.

    Seems like I like a lot about this comic.

    • Joenis

      That’s good to hear! In the initial script writing I worried from time to time that her character would be to unrealistic to people… but I went forward with the way I wrote her anyway because I personally understand where she’s coming from; she shares personal traits with myself and people I know. So I assure you, in a way shes real. :P

      I’ll do my best to keep the story interesting! :]

  11. Spanky McBubbles

    Some days my mind frame is a lot like hers, especially with the fall weather changing to more overcast rainy, dark and dreary days.

    • Joenis

      Really? Those types of days are the ones I’m looking forward to, I’m not a huge fan of bright-sunny-warm days.

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