Chapter 1 – Kindled Eye : Page 14
on January 25, 2010 at 4:19 amPosted In: Chapter 1 : Kindled Eye, Comic
Don’t have much to say this week other than I’m excited for the next few pages. At this moment this page is the most colorful strip yet and aesthetically the closest to my long term vision of this comic. This is what this comic is about, magic, darkness, mystery! :]
New Vote incentive! A Wallpaper for your computers of the last panel; Eydis casting the magic for the first time. Hope you enjoy!
↓ Transcript
[Panel 1]
Eydis' Eye fully rolled back start to glow and excrete magical energy.
[Panel 2]
Eydis knocks the creature away shouting
Eydis: GET AWAY FROM ME!
[Panel 3]
Eydis' body start to be taken over by the magic in her body.
Eydis: This Power...
[Panel 4]
Eydis: heh.
Eydis' Eye fully rolled back start to glow and excrete magical energy.
[Panel 2]
Eydis knocks the creature away shouting
Eydis: GET AWAY FROM ME!
[Panel 3]
Eydis' body start to be taken over by the magic in her body.
Eydis: This Power...
[Panel 4]
Eydis: heh.
heh.
HA!
heh goes two ways… mind breakage or casual recognition that reality is just a perspective.
Little bit of both a presume.
dude i think that third frame is the best drawing of eydis i’ve seen you do. awesome job! i’m diggin the magic effects too
Thank you, sir! It seems that over time I’m learning how to draw her better as who she is become more apparent to me… if that makes sense? I was so giddy about finishing that last panel that I made it into a desktop wallpaper cos just as you said, it the best drawing of Eydis I’ve done yet so It seemed to be appropriate. :]
I demand to know what the “heh” is all about about!!
Your demands will be answered in the next few weeks
Is it just me, or do magical powers really make a girl hawt?
They make a lady that much more attractive. :3
Now we’re really getting somewhere with this! Excitement over here on my end to see how this all plays out! Love everything about this strip right here, down to the magical effects going on. This=full of win
Why thank you! :] The next few pages are going to be pretty much like this.
oh man oh man. why can’t i just click next and see next week’s one? If ever there were a good reason for time travel this would be it.
also, totally using the wallpaper right now. giggty gig
haha, why don’t you try to get a hot tub time machine?
Was that a sufficient size for your computer? I have that wall paper in two more larger sizes if you need it. In a few weeks I’ll be post them on the “extras” page, but if you contact me about it I’ll send you a larger one before then.
haha woah that movie looks awesome. and actually I could use a bigger size. Next time you’re on you should send it to me
It’s online at the “extras” page!
Reading this out of order I thought her shirt said “Loud Whore,” since I hadn’t seen it unobscured beforehand. I like “Loot Whore” but now I also like “Loud Whore.” Also, your style is developing beautifully! You’re really getting a nice feel for Eydis and we can certainly see your excitement in the work.
LMAO, “Loud Whore” is 10x funnier! She has a “Loot Whore” shirt cos I wanted to paint a picture of her overall personality; She’s a total geek, probably even plays WoW!
Thank you so much for that compliment, it means a lot to me to hear that people like my work especially if my growth and passion for this project are apparent. Glad to have you on board. :]
Sir, the third panel of this page is awesome!
The magical effects and the background really add to the feel I think you want to achieve. And it’s also a great drawing of Eydis.
I’ve downloaded the wallpaper on my iPod to use a part as a background, but while doing that, I saw the cover of Volume I, so that’s now officially my iPod background, and I like it! (Besides that, it’s also usefull to tell friends about your comic.)
I forgot to tell you something.
I don’t trust the font she’s talking in in the last two panels…
And I certainly don’t trust that “heh”…
That’s pretty awesome! I’ve considered making an iPhone/iPod background as one of the available backgrounds but if figured if people wanted them they would just zoom in or something. Know that I know some actually uses it, maybe I’ll make one for the futures backgrounds down the time. Also thanks for sporting it on your iPod and telling your friends, it’s appreciated. :]
I’m glad the font change was noticed and sparked a feeling of “un-trust” in you, thats what i was going for!
Thanks, iPod/iPhone size wallpapers would be nice. Of course, if I’m the only one who would actually use them, I understand if you don’t consider it worth the effort.
I’ll make a few when I get the chance.