Chapter 1 – Kindled Eye : Page 14

Discussion (20) ¬

  1. Half Note

    I see that you’re cheating on me w/ your fictional comic character.

    NOW FRIENDS!

    • Joenis

      Seriously, love that youtube clip. Jone’s Big Ass Truck Rental & Storage is amazing. :]

  2. Jimidean

    HAHHAHHAHAHAAH i love the after vote comic! thats EXACTLY how i picture you drawing her! LOL

    Oooo shes cute here! ;)

    • Joenis

      That’s actually how i felt after i finished that joke strip. I was really happy with the way she looked in the kissing panel. Also, the lip-biting on this page. :]

  3. Igor

    I want moar nao!

  4. Ali

    Perfect eye droop, sir! Sells the situation perfectly!

    • Joenis

      You don’t think it make her look like she’s about to go to sleep? :P

  5. Teddy

    You have found a way to make girls woozy without the use of alcohol. Congrats!

  6. Patrick

    I support you and your comic strip character getting married

    • Joenis

      It seems that everyone is just gonna comment on the vote incentive this week! lol, wasn’t my intended goal, but I’m glad people are liking it.

      And you know you’d marry her if you could! :P

  7. nixonagnew

    it’s the first time she’s noticed him, but has she actually seen him?

    • Joenis

      Yes, she looked right at him. I was trying to convey a bit of fear in her eyes in the panel before she gets all woozy. Next week will clear things up a bit more i think.. or make it more confusing.. idk. lol

  8. Spanky McBubbles

    I like the subtle lip bite action you got going on in this one. In fact, her facial expressions are spot on, with the emotions you’re trying to get across! Another interesting strip this week, and so looking forward to next weeks! :D

    • Joenis

      Yay! I’m glad I was able to pull that off. I was really nervous about drawing the lip bite, it can be rather difficult. One wrong curve and you’ve gone from sexy to retarded in 2.5 seconds! lol

      Thanks for the comment! :]

  9. Zebyron

    Looks like I missed a great bonus strip.
    Can we make a deal?
    If I promise to vote every single day for the next two weeks, will you show me the incentives I missed? :p
    I might even continue voting daily. ;)

    I like the design of this page. The expression in the first panel is really good, but I have to admit that at first I thought “Bob” had made her fall asleep in the last panel.

    • Joenis

      Sound’s like a deal! :P I’ll maybe make a blog about it over at my portfolio site in the next week or so, once this hellish nightmare of a week is over! Been way busy with so much going on. Anyway, yeah, I’ll make a little notification about it here at the site when i goes up as a blog.

      We’ll shes loosing consciousness… so that’s sort of like sleeping.. right?

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