Chapter 1 – Kindled Eye : Page 12

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  1. Arzy

    I like that she has a UI poster.=)

  2. Teddy

    Heh, that’d pretty well be my reaction too.

    Actually I think I’d try and poke it.

    • Drakanor Dream

      I second the poking. As well as third the examining!

      • Joenis

        It looks like we got some little scientists on our hands! :]

        I’m pretty sure I’d be on that boat along with you guys. I usually like to get to the bottom of things.

  3. scotticus fergisus

    very nice, i can see improvement on the line work more with each post :)

  4. nixonagnew

    I agree with Scotticus, definite continuing improvement. I really like the look of the third and the last frame as well.

    • Joenis

      Those are my two favorite panels as well, I got to play with them more as individual entities (much like the way I do unconscious ink), for the first time on this page. That alone made this page more fun, efficient, and better looking to me.

  5. Half Note

    I want that doll!!

    • Joenis

      I figured you’d like that. i keep throwing in little doll ideas in this story in case i decided I’d like to try to make them.

  6. willedwardian

    nixonagnew took the words out of my fingers. i like the angle of the third frame and i love the goggle effect in the last. great job can’t wait for more!

    • Joenis

      LOL, I love your phrasing sir! “nixonagnew took the words out of my fingers.” Very nice!

      I too am pleased that the goggles came out as well as they did.

  7. Teddy

    So

    What the heck is so special about the goggles?

    • Joenis

      I believe they do one of a few things… either 1) let you see people naked 2) infrared sensor 3) Look at things that don’t exist 4) make you look retarded.

      You’ll have to wait til next week to see! :P

  8. Spanky McBubbles

    Special aviator/steampunk goggles going on to check it out. I like it!

    • Joenis

      Don’t you wish you could have goggles like that? I do. :]

  9. Zebyron

    I like the fact that she continues putting on her clothes while she wonders about a dice floating in her room.

    I wish I could have goggles like that.
    (Do I smell a merchandise idea?)

    • Joenis

      haha, what making goggles as a merch item? I’m not really sure how I’d go about making those. That would be a random cool idea though, if it were plausible.

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