Book I – Serendipity

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  1. Ali

    Wow, man, looks really good. I’m pretty excited to have a graphic novel I can read. Looks like you definitely learned from my missteps with SSW. It’s been a long time coming, but it seems to we worth the wait.

    Can’t wait to see next weeks!

    • Joenis

      Many thanks for all the help you’ve given me along the way, let’s cross our fingers an hope this will be a success! :]

  2. Patrick

    seriously man. your drawing ability has gotten so much better. truly amazing. can’t wait to see where it goes.

    • Joenis

      Thank you for following my work this long! I hope to continue improving and I hope you enjoy this comic; I’m doing what I can to make sure each week will be interest.

  3. Taversia

    Wonderful! =) Looking forward to seeing how this new story unfolds. I LOVE this cover art. This is absolutely gorgeous.. <3

    • Joenis

      Thank You! This page took me the longest by far (from what I’ve done).

  4. AndyCarolan

    Beautiful start to the new comic, congrats! – looking forward to reading how it unfolds! :)

  5. David

    Very nice! I love your colors. Can’t wait to see where this goes.

    • Joenis

      I’m glad you noticed the colors, I’ve been spending a lot of time coming up with a strong aesthetic for the whole thing. Color’s been the most challenging yet rewarding part of working on ABlue so far. So Thanks for noticing!

  6. niXtuff

    Oh sweet, its started.

    I have no idea who the heck the girl is, but she’s kinda hot, so ima keep reading.

    • Joenis

      LMAO, that cracked me up! I’m flattered that you find one of my creation attractive. There’s gonna be another hot girl as the story unfolds. :D

  7. Jimidean

    WHOOOWOOO!!!!! Congrats on your new project! Cant wait to read it! :D

    • Joenis

      Hope you’re gonna like it as much I have working on it so far.

  8. Michael M.

    Nicely done sir!

  9. nixonagnew

    who’s excited? I’M excited. the background is stunning also. woooo excitement!

    • Joenis

      haha YAY for excitement. I’m excited too.

  10. D. Long

    Yeah! Nice work good sir!

  11. Half Note

    Finally!! Ive been waiting for this day since the birth of Jesus!

    • Joenis

      LOL, I was sitting in Denny’s waiting for my food when I decided to check my mail on my phone. When I this comment I actually laughed out loud. Thanks.

  12. Rembrand

    Super! Like the integration of photo in the background. I didn’t even notice it at first. Way to go!

    • Sen

      I didn’t notice it at first either. When I did I was like “wait, whoa, what the heck? Hey, neat.”

      • Joenis

        DAMN YOU GUYS! haha, i was REALLY hoping people wouldn’t notice that i caved in and put a picture for the fine details in the back. :P Oh well, the fact that most people didn’t see it and two artists did doesn’t make it as bad. Haha, leave it to an artist right?

        :]

        • Half Note

          Oh .. you didn’t want us to notice that???

          • Joenis

            Meh, I don’t know. It’s not a huge deal. It was just me trying to avoid having to draw the rest of the city in the background since it’s so finely detailed. That over hang took me enough time as it was. :]

  13. lexipainter

    Okay I’m going to be a butt here..

    I like the background picture.. pretty neat the way it blends in.

    but the girl.. her boobs are too big and her torso is too long.. if you made her head bigger it would look more anatomically correct, or make the rest of her body slightly smaller.. imo.

    besides that, it looks good :-)

    • Joenis

      Thanks for the critique. I realized a few of those things that you pointed out once I was done drawing and coloring it, but eventually came to the conclusion that since its technically a “cartoon,” often characters will have elongated features to accentuate them. Anime for instance always makes the women’s torso to short, boobs too big, and legs to long. So I figured I was still in the green with this drawing. The pages that follow actually make the my characters look a bit more like what you see in the header. Also, I wasn’t used to drawing on such a large piece of paper. This page is actually the absolute first time i ever drew on a few 11×17 piece of Bristol board.

      Either way I appreciate your comment and will keep those things in consideration as my art work develops. Thanks.

  14. Arzy

    Wow, this really looks amazing. You have grown so much as an artist in the past few years… The photo blends in well in the background.

    This is an exciting beginning! =)

    • Joenis

      Thank you, and many thanks for following my works for so long. :]

  15. Jimidean

    Hay man i had to comment twice im quite psyched for this! :)

  16. Shawn

    Real life background is a great touch!
    good job!

  17. SpilledInkGuy

    Looks awesome – excited to see more! :)

  18. Paul

    Congrats on the launch! Excited to see what’s been percolating in your head for so long!

    • Joenis

      You may regret those words later! :P …but thanks! :]

  19. spanky mcbubbles

    Damn! Love what I see so far! The art is amazing, and I love how you layered off of an actual picture in the background. (At least that’s what it looks like on my screen.) Congratulations on the launch!

    • Joenis

      It tis a photo, but don’t get used to photos in this comic. It was sorta for the over elaborate splash page type thing because it was taking so long to draw i think those little details in the back would have killed me.

      Thanks for coming by. :]

  20. midnight666massacre

    WOOO NEW SERIES ^_^

  21. Dennon & Angel

    Joenis!!

    WOW!! Super Awesome Graphics!! Keep up the good work!! I will definitely bookmark this! :D

    • Joenis

      Thanks for stopping by, I hope you enjoy this comic as in unfolds. :]

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